There are days when 50 words is all it takes.
His music moved him, colored his soul, transported him. It coursed through his veins, exuded through his pores, infected everyone with his joy. The crowd responded, riding the buoyant waves of music as it swelled lifting them to brilliant heights, opening their eyes. In the music, they united, finding freedom.
(50 words)
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Keep on writing.
Jo Hawk The Writer
Music without words is the most powerful language the earth has known.
E for Egg
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I agree. In music, everyone speaks the same language. Thanks for reading!
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50 words says it all. Nicely done.
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Thank you Iain. Your approval means a lot to me. π
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Nice! The back and forth with the audience especially takes us there as readers.
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I am so happy you enjoyed the piece. This was a fun one to write.
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A complete post, 10/10 one… And that to in just 50 words! Appreciate that!
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Team MocktailMommies
Collage Of Life
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Thank you for the kind words. I appreciate your comment. π
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Beautiful! I liked not knowing right away whether ‘he’ was a listener or a performer, and you clarify everything so beautifully in 50 words. Exuberant, indeed!
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For me the photo was a huge help. I knew what I wanted to write and it all solidified when I found the image. Thanks you.
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Love it! And great choice of word.
A to Z Challenge: Entertainment! TV Talk>
Isa-Lee Wolf
A Bit 2 Read
@IsaLeeWolf
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Thank you. The words volunteered for this one. π
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I like that your first five A to Z posts have approached your theme through different subjects, different genre, and different styles. Well done, Jo!
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Thank you. I am happy that you like them. The treatment for each story was simply what I felt worked for the emotion I was trying to portray.
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Well done!
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Your story evokes your word so well. WeekendsInMaine
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Thank you!
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Fabulous post! =)
https://sujataravi6.wordpress.com/2017/04/06/e-is-for-exercise-atozchallenge/
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Thank you. I am in denial about exercise, but if your promise not to tell anyone I will hop over and take a look. π
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