Title: The Drop
Source: Friday Fictioneers sponsored by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields-Addicted to Purple
Word count: 100 words
His directions showed a booth in the empty section at the rear of the diner. The hostess motioned for him to sit and dropped the menu on the table. Bart sat his back to the brick wall and watched her disappear around the divider, leaving him alone.
He leaned forward and ran his hands underneath the tabletop and the bench where he sat. He checked his phone, determining he was in the correct spot
“Where is it,” he wondered?
A planter box sat on the divider and Bart’s hand snaked along the rim, searching. He removed the envelope and smiled.
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Keep on writing.
Jo Hawk The Writer
Oh! And you’re not giving us any clue –lover, spy, just a common crook? This would make a great beginning for a variety of different stories.
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LOL Yes she might be the person to “case the joint” for the real thief. Plenty of ideas here.
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And that envelope contains the top secret recipe for fried chicken. Planted by the hostess.
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LOL No telling whats inside.
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So intriguing! I want to know what’s in that envelope! 🙂
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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LOL So do I. 😉
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Great start for a longer story. Slickly written and well described.
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Thank you. There are multiple avenues to explore with this story.
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Mysterious! What was inside the envelop?
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I don’t know. Got any ideas? 😉
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Intriguing and very mysterious – definitely one to keep us guessing. What could have been in that envelope…? I’m guessing it wasn’t just a love letter, and he’s very secretive about it all. Goodness, the mind boggles with possibilities. Well written, Jo. 😀
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Thank you. There is defiantly more to the story.
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So intriguing!
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😊
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