From Sonya’s 3LineTales at Only100Words.
You can find the original prompt here. Thank you, Sonya.
photo by Ernest Brillo via Unsplash
They jumped, hands held high, gyrating with uncensored abandon as the music thumped, a pounding heartbeat replacing their own.
Desperate to escape, willing sacrifices they rushed headlong into promised bliss.
A promise that was only another way to die.
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Jo Hawk The Writer
Jo Hawk 
Interesting twist on the concept. Inside the building is the exit to real life? Very nice!
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Thanks. 😊
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By the way, you need to update your about page! It’s probably more important for getting followers that one would think.
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Ah, my Achilles’ heel, I am afraid.
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Hahaha. Indeed. 🙂
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the twist at the end was nice
and feel like this could go in different directions…
really liked
as the music thumped
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Thank you. I like to attempt to put layers into my pieces no matter how brief. Glad you liked it. 😊
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🙂
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