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A timid morning ray reached through the window, warmed my face, tugged my eyelids, and coaxed me to wake with the newborn day. I yawned, stretched and felt the chill air, a chill that was absent when I fell to sleep.
It was a time when nights pushed back the edges of day and cool fingers plucked warmth from the sun. The sun would submit, darkness would rule the world allowing the handmaidens of snow and ice to dance while summer slumbered.
For now, there were preparations needed ahead of darkness’ descent. I rose, dressed and flung open the door. Night’s chill reached into my lungs, stealing my breath while the sun dazzled my senses with crystalline grass and lace-edged leaves. My hand touched the shawl hanging on its peg where I had abandoned it months before. Delicate wool magically constructed stored welcome warmth, my shield, my protector. Armed, I stepped into a world transformed.
The dazzling display would fade, it was the harbinger, a gentle warning to make haste. My sisters emerged, we marveled a moment, then without a word, we spread iridescent wings, and rising like the mist, we flew.
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Keep on writing.
Jo Hawk The Writer
What a scene you words have conjured. Lovely
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Thank you Sadje. I wrote it while I shivered under my blanket. 😊
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It’s getting colder day by day. A little more than last year I think.
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It is only 30 hear today and we are already talking in wind chills. Time to order a cord of wood for the fire.
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❄️
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Beautifully written, very poetic.
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Thank you Brenda. So happy you liked it. 😊
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sublime Jo! especially the last paragraph, had me part of your landscape. the kind of reading that just makes the very soul sigh
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Aww thank you Gina. I am glad it resonated with you. 😊❤
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i really liked this style Jo, reminded me of your cinnamon toast story, it has the same flow and somehow a feeling of deep contentment
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Your words are like music, flowing perfectly like a chilly wind 😉
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And your words are music to my ears. 😉 Sorry is is a cold wind blowing but it is that time of year. Thank you for reading and commenting. 😊
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Great word picture! I am so glad I checked your site again. I thought I was following you, but apparently I wasn’t. I was wondering why I wasn’t seeing posts by you. Now I solved the problem. 🙂
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Well I am so happy you found the problem. 😉 Thank you for the follow and I am glad you liked the story. 😊💕
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So am I and you are very welcome! 🙂
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