Title: Undying Love
Source: Friday Fictioneers sponsored by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields-Addicted to Purple
Word count: 100 words
Javier sat on the cemetery wall, checking his list, and tried to ignore the bleating goat. He promised Alma he would follow her instructions tonight and he couldn’t disappoint her. Long ago, he had pledged his love and swore to protect her with his life. She said it would never come to that.
That night the cemetery lay shrouded in eerie silence. The full moon illuminated the goat and voodoo relics swimming in a pool of blood on the discarded marble slab.
Javier knelt, marveling at Alma’s pale skin sparkling in the wan light and raised her from her slumber.
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Keep on writing.
Jo Hawk The Writer
Interesting
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Thank you Sadje. ✨💕✨
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Welcome
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I hope no one is planning to sacrifice that goat!
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It’s good when a plan comes together
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Dear Jo,
I’m left trying to figure out whether Alma is alive or not. Atmospheric and intriguing piece.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you Rochelle. I am sure she has been protected, so she lives in some form.
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So much more to this story. Very intriguing.
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Thank you Dale. 😊
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That’s a fair trade. The goat’s life for the life of a loved one. But still, poor goat!
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I am sure Javier is glad it wasn’t him. 😊
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i won’t blame javier for trying. 🙂
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I think he is a good guy. 😊 Thanks for reading.
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I’m not sure this is a good idea… I have a feeling that Alma will be a very different Alma when Javier is ready… (maybe she will bleat for instance)
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Björn I think you are on to something. I don’t think Alma will be quite the same. Thanks for reading. ✨💕✨
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I knew there would be a sacrifice in the group somewhere! Good write Jo!!
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LOL Goats = Sacrifice Right? Thanks Violet. ✨💕✨
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Very interesting!
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Thank you Lisa
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There are repurcussions for waking the dead. Aren’t there?
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I believe there are. Thanks for reading Priya.
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