Title: Safe Passage
Source: Weekend Writing Prompt #94—Indistinct
Objective: Write a poem or piece of prose in exactly 18 words.
Around us, indistinct shapes swilled. Hand in hand, step by step, the terror receded, and we passed unharmed.
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Keep on writing.
Jo Hawk The Writer
The tale of their passage would be quite a story! 😀
Nice one! 🙂
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Isn’t it amazing what 18 words can spark. Glad you liked it. 😊
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So true! 🙂
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Nice one! Well done with so few words transferring (no pun?) so much! 🙂 Na’ama
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Thank you, Na’ama. Love the pun. Too funny😊
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🙂
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Nice one, Jo.
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Thank you, my friend. 😊
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I really enjoyed this tale of a harrowing journey which turned out well in the end.
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Aw, Deborah. Your words make me smile. Thanks for reading and commenting. 😊
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Dear Jo,
The sense of relief at the end is tangible.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle, for your kind words. 😊
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OOO nice 18!
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Thank you Violet. 😊
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Sometimes, the scariest things can turn out to be the least menacing. ..nice tale
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Thank you Larry. Glad you liked it. 😊
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