Title: Go Bag, Go
Source: Friday Fictioneers sponsored by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields-Addicted to Purple
Word count: 100 words
PHOTO PROMPT © CEAyr
Maria swung her grocery bag, humming a tune as she hurried home. Turning the last corner, she halted, the grocery bag bumping her leg.
Parked in the space by her door, was Carlo’s scooter. Like old times, her heart raced, and bile chocked her throat. Panicking, she scanned the courtyard and glanced at her upstairs window. Senses alert, she turned and ran.
“Oh god. Did he see me?” she wondered as she ran.
People stared, and she slowed her pace.
“Think, Maria. You have a plan.”
She retrieved the key from her purse.
“Train station. Left luggage locker. Destination unknown.”
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It’s too bad she has to do something that drastic. Maybe soon he’ll get his comeuppance
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Hope, and a plan is often all there is. Thanks for reading and commenting Larry.
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She’s very smart to have a plan and resources already set up.
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She has become smarter it seems. Thank you for reading and commenting Alice.
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Great thriller, Jo! So much back-story, and a story arc that goes well beyond the text. I’d enjoy reading a longer version of this.
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Thank you Penny. Yes I can imagine a long road traveled to bring her to this place. I think I will add it to the list. 😊
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There could be many reasons why she has to run, it’s a tough life constantly looking over your shoulder.
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So true, Iain, I am constantly amazed at the story possibilities generated from Rochelle’s prompts.
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An escape fund! My friend had one of those in a wardrobe in his home somewhere I think. Think he went to the Costa del Sol for a week!
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Having a Go Bag is never a bad idea. Hmm, I might have to put one together. Glad you enjoyed the story.
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Scary. Good job Carlo left his scooter where she could see it.
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How awful to have to need an escape route!
Excellent thriller!
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Always good to have a plan B. Glad you liked the story Dale. Thank you.
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She’s well prepared, that’s good for her. Very exciting story, with so many open questions.
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Thank you. I am happy you liked the piece. 😊
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Exciting intriguing and thought-provoking! Loveit.
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Wow. Thank you, Keith. Glad you liked it.
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Why is Maria so afraid of Carlo?
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That is the question. Thanks for reading and commenting Abhijit .
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Pretty serious problem solving I think. Maybe Carlo’s more than just an ex-flame.
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Whoever he is, it is clear she wants nothing to do with him. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Here’s to hoping everything works out as planned. Nice write.
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Thanks, Violet. She seems like a smart cookie. I think she will work things out. ✨💕✨
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May Carlo sit there and rot; may Maria succeed in finding a free and happy life.
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LOL I think Carlo will get what he deserves, in the end. Thanks for reading and commenting my friend. ✨😄✨
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I like the skillful way you shifted the mood from her carefree situation, with the little detail about the shopping bag bumping her leg, to the urgency at the end. Poor Maria to have her tranquility spoiled like that – but you’ve set her up as a survivor so that’s good.
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Thank you for the kind words, Margaret. I like strong women too. 😉
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Its interesting to ponder what their previous relationship was, so that she absolutely must escape before he sees her. My money’s on domestic abuse. But maybe she owes him money, or he is there to blackmail her with some embarrassing truth. Intriguing!
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There are any number of possibilities, as you say. I have this one on my list to expand into something longer. I am glad you liked it. ✨💕✨
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