Title: Wisdom Re-Imagined
Source: Weekend Writing Prompt #98 – Impervious
Objective: Write a poem or piece of prose in exactly 99 words.
Like the mountain goat, Moritz selected his footing carefully. He scouted the rugged terrain, searching for a spot impervious to the winter snows and spring mudslides.
The villagers in the valley below laughed, but Moritz remained steadfast, immune to their taunts. He trusted the overhanging wall would protect him. He dragged building supplies to the narrow strip of land next to the sheer cliff face.
He worked his dream, his structure took shape, and the winter snow proved his case. Those in the valley saw Moritz’s wisdom. With work finished on his new home, they called him a genius.
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Keep on writing.
Jo Hawk The Writer
An amazing place
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LOL made all the more amazing as it only exists in my imagination. 💕
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That’s the fun of being a writer.
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LOL Yes it is. 😊
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😊👍
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Wonderfully done, Jo!! I admit, I would have called him nuts, too…
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Thank you Dale. One person’s crazy…. 😄😄
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🤣😂
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toil and perseverance, I like Moritz. even when it was hard and no one there to support him, he went on, for he had a vision of what could be. we all get sidetracked and demotivated, your story reinforces my belief that we need to just keep on, hard work does pay off. thank you Jo, i needed to read this today. sending you hugs and blessings!!
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Thank you dear Gina. I am so happy this story spoke to you. The ones that see a different way often walk a difficult path. 💕💕💕
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yes that is true, your story has me thinking alot this morning and I hope to consolidate my thoughts before the week is over!!
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Always a good goal. You know I have heard writing helps thought congeal. 😉💕
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Sounds logical enough. Like picking leaves off a knowledge tree
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LOL Yes I suppose so. 💕
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you for the reblog Charles. 💕❤💕
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Always happy to share your posts, My Dear!
Xoxoxo
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What a wonderful backstory you have created for the brilliant photo! I would love to see this house for myself.
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Perserverance is for the strong, not the weak. Great story telling.
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So true Eugenia. Glad you enjoyed the story.
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🙂
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Inspiring thank you. Great think piece. Love your writing 🙂
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Thank you for your kind words, Jen. 💕
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