Title: Warned
Source: 100 Word Wednesday: Week 128
Word count: 100 words
As they approached the gaping black hole at the mountain’s base, Chrissy grew nervous.
“Mom, I don’t want to go in,” she squeezed her mother’s waist hard.
Mom flinched, the handbrake squealed, and she stopped the bike next to the picnic tables.
“What’s wrong?” she asked.
“Can we go home?” she pleaded as Mom lifted her from the bike’s kangaroo seat and set her on the graveled path.
“Why?”
“The tree people are watching,” she whispered, “and they’re telling us to leave.”
“They say you’ll die.”
The sky darkened and a cold wind raised goosebumps.
“Tell them we’re leaving. Now.”
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Keep on writing.
Jo Hawk The Writer
Ominous! I love the mother taking seriously the child’s voice – part of a much bigger story? Thank you for joining us again for 100 Word Wednesday 🖤
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Thanks, Kelly. It may grow into a bigger story, as I didn’t want to stop writing. 🙂
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Yay!! Totally how I feel about some of these shorter stories ❤ Some of our writers have also looped them into longer story arcs — the choice is totally yours! Thank you for joining us ❤
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Creepy
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😮👍
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Your stories are always unusual.
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Thank you Sadje.
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You’re welcome 😉
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Yes I would be getting out of there!!
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When your gut says go…. then go. 💕
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Yup! 🙂
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