Title: If She Only Knew
Source: 100-Word Writing Dare
Prompt: …if she only knew…
Word count: 100 words
I am repeatedly drawn to this bleak monument that commemorates my deepest regret and replays a scene I can never fix.
They say no one is to blame, tell me to live and learn.
Yet, I can still touch the whimpering monster, taste his evil spark and the heartfelt rage that extinguished my future. Hatred lived in those eyes, fueled by an all-consuming love.
Painful words thrown like brutal punches left me with smoldering embers of bittersweet anguish.
Selfishly, I demolished every bridge with my clumsy attempt to declare my desire. A single wish remains.
If she only knew.
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Keep on writing.
Jo Hawk The Writer
Poignant.
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your first line sets the stage for me, guilt, remorse, clumsily trying to make someone see how much they matter but failing miserably, maybe trying too hard. such a complete tale.
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Thank you for your insightful comment, Gina. Definitely trying too hard. ❤
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Nice job! Great evocative words. Could really feel the emotion here.
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Thanks, Kate. I am delighted you liked it. ❤
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