Title: Abandoned
Source: Weekend Writing Prompt # 153 – Obsolete
Objective: Write a poem or piece of prose in exactly 24 words
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I considered myself young, but my mirror and capricious consensus disagreed. Without compunction, they relegated me to the pasture with the other obsolete workhorses.
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Keep on writing.
Jo Hawk The Writer
Jo Hawk 
Dear Jo,
Love the POV on this. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle. 🙏
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‘capricious consensus’ and ‘compunction’!
Only 24 words but some belters!
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With so few words, I’m afraid my vocabulary is showing. Glad you like it CE. 😊
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Good one.
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Thank you, Sadje. 🙏
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You’re welcome 😉
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Abandoned – Weekly Writing Prompt
I am the most senior employee. Many cohorts have gone before me. Can I survive another ten months? It was then the phone rang!
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Bravo, Irwin. You have me on the edge of my seat. I am afraid I am waiting for the other shoe to drop.
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Thanks. Looks like I’ll have to give your weekly writing prompts a try. 🌞
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Please do.
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ce beat me to the comment! Loved the capricious consensus!
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Looks like I might have to put those words in my back pocket. Glad you liked it, Dale.
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Yes indeed!
And yes, I did!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you for sharing, the story Charles. 🙏
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Well said!
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Thank you, Eugenia 🙏
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