Title: Memory Lane
Source: Weekend Writing Prompt # 156 – Home
Objective: Write a poem or piece of prose in exactly 114 words
Photo by Vidar Nordli-Mathisen on Unsplash
The night’s darkness hid his destination until he arrived. He didn’t feel nostalgia, hope, or even curiosity. He’d burned those bridges years ago. The freak spring snowstorm stirred forgotten habits, guided his car to a faraway country he could no longer call home.
Black snowfall accumulated. Cold hardened him, and he waited.
A light punched back grey edges of a lonely dawn, a harbinger of her brighter day.
A man moved through the house toward the kitchen. He pulled filters from the drawer, measured coffee, and retrieved her favorite mug nestled in the cabinet next to the sink.
Bitter regret stained his face as he started his car, resigned to being the one departed.
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Jo Hawk The Writer
Nice.
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Thank you, Sadje. 🙏
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You’re welcome 😇
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Makes you wonder what propelled him to drive there. Though I do believe we can be distracted enough to go “blindly” into a direction.
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I have found myself arriving at a destination with no memory of driving there. Auto-pilot and a distracted mind are where I place the blame, Dale.
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Me too!
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A very poignant piece, Jo. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle. 🙏
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heavy with sadness, even the snow seems dark
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Thank you, Gina. 💕
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Such things happen in life. Excellent Jo.
My short story
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Thank you, Keith.
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Excellent 👏👏
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Thank you, my friend. 💕
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😘😘😘
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you for sharing, my little story. ✨🙏✨
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Always happy to read and share your posts with followers, Dear!
xoxo
😘💕🌹
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I love all the imagery you worked into this piece. Great job!
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Thank you for your kind words, Jess. 💕
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Nicely done. Weather, time of day, and sentence structure all conspire to set the grim tone of this piece.
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Thank you D. The photo was the key for this story. Glad you liked it. 😊🙏
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