Title: Lost
Source: Weekend Writing Prompt # 157 – Fade
Objective: Write a poem or piece of prose in exactly 17 words
I cannot follow.
Her face, her voice, her memory fade to nothingness.
Misery shatters my empty world.
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Keep on writing.
Jo Hawk The Writer
Oh, how heartbreaking. May his soul find hers in dreams.
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Thank you, Na’ama. 🙏
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What a fitting picture for your b poignant poem
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Thank you, Sadje.
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A pleasure
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Powerful and heartbreaking!
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I am delighted you liked it. 🙏
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Well done in such few words! 🙂
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Dear Jo,
Such a heart-breaking and tender poem.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle. 🙏
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your 3 lines described the emotion in that photo perfectly. so few words, but with a deep impact
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Oh Jo…. that was beautiful.
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Thank you, Dale. I’m delighted you enjoyed it.
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Very much so
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