NaNoWriMo Day 8

Below is short blub I threw together about the novel I am writing.

After surviving the Civil War, Gilbert’s only desire is to forget the horrors of the past and create a prosperous and happy family like the one he knew as a child. But after the heartbreaking deaths of four of his eight children and his beloved wife Rachael, will Gilbert be able to hold his four surviving sons together? Can he somehow manage to build a life that he dreams for his family? Or will his past tear them apart?

Photo credit: Veronique Debord via Visual hunt / CC BY-SA

Photo credit: Veronique Debord via Visual hunt / CC BY-SA

  • What do you think?
  • Is this a book you would like to read?
  • What would you change?
  • What do you like?
  • Should I go back to the drawing board?

Keep on writing.

Jo Hawk The Writer

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