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The Air BNB listing said it was close to the city center, clean, one bedroom, a kitchenette, a bath and a lounge. And it was cheap. I submitted the deposit confirming the three-month booking. On the flight, I slept, it kept me from thinking. From the airport, I boarded a train that whisked me to the small mountain town. My bag bumped across the cobbles as I followed the directions on my phone.
He met me with the keys and walked me up to the second floor. He gave me the Wi-Fi password and said I should call him if I needed anything. The rental was exactly as advertised. He was nice, but I couldn’t wait for him to leave. The door shut behind him and I listened to his footsteps carry him downstairs and onto the street. The breath I had been holding since before I boarded the plane escaped and I collapsed on the left side of the couch. I ran my fingers through my hair and wondered if I would really do this.
I had come this far. Reaching under the couch, I felt along the frame until I found the gun.
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Jo Hawk The Writer
Excellent ending, because the picture made me THINK that you didn’t want to stay in the isolated house.
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LOL A plot twist in less than 200 words. Glad you like it.
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Yes… you’ve been practicing, so that it is working!
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love the suspense build up and then the inconclusive ending, bravo!
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Your comments make the writing worthwhile.
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i really like your stories, sorry i get to them all in a row, takes me some time to catch up!
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Its all good. Life gets busy and I spend time catching up too.
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