Title: Escape Plan
Source: Friday Fictioneers sponsored by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields-Addicted to Purple
Word count: 100 words

PHOTO PROMPT © J Hardy Carroll
Gerard paused before opening the door. Tired from a long day’s work, he could hear his family screeching and shrieking behind the door. He squared his shoulders and entered.
After dinner, he escaped and snuck into his shed. Gerard spent peaceful hours designing, sawing, carving and assembling his wooden creations. He often fell asleep at his bench and his wife would wake him to come to bed.
“You should spend time with the family,” she would say. Gerard would shrug, he knew she wouldn’t understand.
When he died, they discovered ornately designed and carved mechanical clocks hidden in the rafters.
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Keep on writing.
Jo Hawk The Writer
A screeching family would send me to the peace and quiet of my workshop too. Nicely told.
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Yep. That is the introvert in my speaking. I am off to write in my shed. 😊
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That’s a lot of screech avoidance.
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Yes but at least he was doing something productive. 😊
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Fifty sheds of grey. Nice one, Jo
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Glad you enjoyed it.
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Very well put together. Liked it.
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Thank you 😃
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I wonder if anyone missed him though? Perhaps his consuming interest was more than enough for him.
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Perhaps. We can hope so. Thanks for commenting.😊
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Loved this gentle story about a man who obviously loves his family, but can’t bear to be with them all the time. Beautifully done!
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Thank you Susan. I know some of us require more solitude than others. 😊
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Your story moves pleasingly from the specific actions of a single day to a general conclusion about the life of a solitary man who loved the craft of making ornate wooden clocks. Well done!
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We often forget that the time to make a life is today. I am glad you like it. 😊
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A lovely tale, I wonder why he had to keep his creations secret? Perhaps the fact he was peacefully making them was enough and he sought no more than that.
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JH, this is a tale most people can relate to. Everyone needs down time to pursue their interests. Its too bad he didn’t think his wife would understand. Nicely done.
Susan
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Thank you Susan. Yes we all require down time, just some more than others. 😊
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gerald had his shed. some go to the restroom for peace and quiet. 🙂
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Whatever works 😊
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Lovely story, and I, too, can relate to needing time alone. Maybe he couldn’t bear to part with his creations and didn’t show them to anyone because of that.
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Glad you liked it. We don’t know what motivated others sometimes. 😊
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It’s all about time, I guess. A lot of pathos here.
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Perhaps. Being alone is not always a bad thing.
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I really like the sense of the man’s quiet resignation, and how he creates beautiful carved objects instead of shouting at his screeching family. Rather poignant, well told.
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Such kind words. I am happy you liked it. 😊
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Ah, the character is relatable. A screeching family would send me to a quiet place for sure. Love the story.
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At least he has an outlet. Glad you liked the story. 😊
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In a sense a lucky man to be able to escape to his haven just sad that his family forced him there
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Sometimes things work out for the best. Thanks for reading. 😊
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It is sad that his family only find out just what he has been doing in his shed all these years after his death. Thankfully, he did have a place to go to avoid the loudness and be one with his tools…
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We all need a sanctuary for retreat when the world is too much. Glad you liked the story.
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So very true. Mine is a good walk with my dog, Zeke… that and writing 🙂
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A beautiful but sad tale of a man whose only joy and peace came from spending hours in the shed making clocks. It’s interesting that the wife said that he should spend more time with his family. The shrieking and screaming drove him from the house and into the solitude and sanctuary of his shed. I’m glad he found some peace and happiness, though.
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Yes, some can handle the chaos of a family while others need more alone time. Thanks for commenting and happy you liked the story. 😊
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We all need a way to escape. Beautiful, melancholic story.
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Thanks for commenting.
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