Title: Fish in a Barrel
Source: Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers
Word count: 170 words
Chrysanta knew a murdered stalked her. It made her anxious. She lurked in dark corners, surveying, watching, calculating her odds before darting to another corner. The stress ate at her. She lost weight, developed a twitch, and her skin itched. The doctor diagnosed ichthyosis and prescribed a tonic, two drops in her water daily.
Beautiful Cherry was the killer’s first victim. Chrysanta shuddered, remembering dinner with her friends. Cherry popping a shrimp into her mouth and the killer grabbing Cherry slicing her throat with a force that threw her skyward. Chrysanta and the others fled.
The Danios family disappearance was a mystery, but Cory swore it was the killer. Pearl had been the last victim. Only Cory, Kuhli and Chrysanta survived.
Hungry, she had to eat, so she ventured into the light at the top of the tank. Gouging herself she didn’t see the green eyes tracking her or the black paw as it scooped into the water and plucked her from the tank. On the cat’s menu: fresh fish.
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Keep on writing.
Jo Hawk The Writer
The Serial Kitty strikes again!
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Indeed. 😉
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This is awesome. Big mean furball.
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I think kitty likes sushi too. 😉
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Fresh is best!
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Ah! a cat and fish game! Even an fish bowl could not save Chrysanta! Poor fish all her near and dear ones are being killed and eaten by green eyed monster. Nice story.
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Thank you Abhijit. It was a fun story to write.
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escaped the knife but felled by the paw – what a fantastic story, what goes on in fish brains. I have a fresh water aquarium at work, sometimes the fish seem to disappear then reappear, spooky.
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Is there a cat in your office? 😸
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no, I hate cats! i grew up in a menagerie, we had at one time 14 cats and they hated me too
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Oh no! They all seem to want to curl up on my lap.
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i had to have stitches for one really bad scratch and tetanus hots, not happy with cats, now dogs i love they are not vindictive. my sister loves cats and she goes into the forest and brings home feral cats to care for. they cuddle up and love her to bits.
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Cat, dogs, I have wild pet squirrels in my yard. They knock on my door when it is snack time.
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really?! wow that is amazing. i saw the biggest one when i was in Toronto, in a park, not tiny like the ones we have in Malaysia, and fed them sugar cubes
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I’ve got no problem believing cats would be this evil! 🙂
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I know they are. 😸😈
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Ah the poor goldfish never saw it coming.
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Nope, I am afraid she was a sitting duck. 😉
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Ha! Nicely done there, a killer on velvet paws, striking from the sky! Made me smile
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Thanks Lynn. Yes velvet paws with killer claws. I am glad the story made you smile. Your comment made me smile 😊
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My pleasure
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