Title: Earning Trust
Source: Friday Fictioneers sponsored by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields-Addicted to Purple
Word count: 100 words
PHOTO PROMPT © Ted Strutz
Avielle walked a path they didn’t see. She didn’t understand their blindness, but she was thankful for their ignorance and their dependence on her. She couldn’t harm them when they needed her protection from the odd things happening in her woods.
No birds sang, and the woods held its breath as it waited. Nothing seemed right. Avielle stopped at the edge of the clearing.
Deep in the hollow engine compartment of the long abandon car, green eyes glowed. The eyes bore into her heart, searching, begging for mercy and protection.
Hand outstretched, she moved forward, hoping it wasn’t a trap.
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Jo Hawk 
Oooh suspenseful!! Good job! I hope it’s not a trap either!
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lol I think she can handle whatever happens. Glad you liked it. ✨💕✨
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🙂
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Wonderfully atmospheric, Jo
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Thank you, Neil. ✨😊✨
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Yes, you have created quite the atmosphere. Something tells me she can handle a lot..
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Thank you, Dale. Took a couple false starts to get here so glad you like it. ✨😊✨
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I so know the feeling!
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Intriguing!
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Thank you Sadje. ✨💕✨
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Welcome
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had a dystopian feel, very good
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I hadn’t thought about it in that light. Glad you liked it. 😊
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I hope it isn’t a trap, but I fear the worst!
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If it were a longer story, the dictates would say it was a trap. Glad you liked it Iain.
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It feels like a trap, Jo, but it shows character to investigate anyway. Nicely balanced piece.
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Thank you for your kind words Kelvin. 💕
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Dear Jo,
Leaves me with lots of questions. Love the atmosphere and the scene you’ve set.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, dear Rochelle. I love your prompts.
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A thriller to unwind. Great.
Regards, SLSM. 🙂
https://stilllovedstillmissed.wordpress.com/2019/01/27/in-search-of-love/
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Thank you. So glad you liked it. 😊
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Avielle seems very kind-hearted. I hope she doesn’t get hurt!
As others have commented, this is a very atmosphere piece.
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So happy you liked it Magarisa
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My pleasure, Jo.
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Beautifully written, Jo!
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Thank you, Brenda.
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Oh I hope it’s a sweet kitten… sounds like it could be.
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Yes, I had thought it might be a kitten, or maybe a fairy, or wood nymph. 😊
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You lead us well into the spooky surroundings and leave us on a scary cliff-hanger, wondering what’s behind the green eyes
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Thank you Michael. It didn’t feel spooky when I wrote it. 😉
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Green eyes. A cat? Something not human? Who knows? You sure left us at a cliff-edge 🙂
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lol Look what happens when you run out of word count. 😉
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Suspenseful!
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✨😊✨
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