Title: A Real Rock Star
Source: Flash Fiction Challenge
Prompt: Write a story about a rock star.
Word count: 99 words
Stars floated above Kye’s head. He couldn’t sleep when the ancients whispered. His gaze shifted from the sky to his sleeping brother. Their sheep rested quietly in the canyon’s safety.
Kye hefted a rock tossing it in his hand before using it to scrape images into the desert varnish coating the granite wall. The scene completed; his fingers rested on the depiction of his world.
The stars spun, eons passed, and the ancient voices grew silent. Kevin hiked into the park, hunting for answers. Placing his hand on the petroglyph he reached through time to touch the creator’s soul.
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Keep on writing.
Jo Hawk The Writer ©
Interesting story
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Thank you, my friend.
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You’re welcome dear
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What a cool take on the prompt!
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Thanks, D. Avery. I am glad you liked it.
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Lovely. I like it.
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Thank you, Chelsea.
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love how you connected the title and the photo prompt, one of those instances when the first words a reader reads is just imprinted on the brain til the end
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Thanks, Gina. When I read the prompt I knew immediately where this story was going. Glad you liked it.
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Awesome, that was such a cool and different take.
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Thank you, my friend.🙂
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I love the way you wove the ancient image with the present. You created something extremely rich with just a few paragraphs. Very cool.
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Thanks K. Elle. I am glad you liked it.
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Such a cool story, Jo! I especially like this line: “The stars spun, eons passed, and the ancient voices grew silent.” I also like the connection between the creator of the art and the one who discovers it. My kind of rock stars!
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Thank you, Charli. Your prompt let me directly to this idea. I can’t wait to read the others in the round up. 👍❤
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Great take on ‘rock’ star!
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Thank you, my friend. ❤
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