Title: Optimal Velocity
Source: Flash Fiction Challenge
Prompt: Write a story that features longboards.
Word count: 99 words
Photo by Austrian National Library on Unsplash
Miners extracted millions from Gold Mountain, but Peggy didn’t want money. She sought powder and speed. The day dawned bright and clear, as she and the longboarders climbed the 1,700-foot slope to the starting position.
Reaching the top, she strapped on her 12-foot long Norwegian skates. She had rubbed her secret dope into the hand-hewn, kiln-dried, vertical-grain Doug fir skis. The mixture of paraffin, tallow, tar, and hemlock oil guaranteed optimal velocity.
The contestants crouched, waiting. The starter hammered the giant saw blade. Peggy pushed against her pole and shot downhill. Sixteen seconds later, she began her next ascent.
_________________________________________
Keep on writing.
Jo Hawk The Writer
Good one Jo.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Sadje. 🙏
LikeLike
You’re welcome 😉
LikeLiked by 1 person
ah a secret recipe!
LikeLiked by 1 person
A secret recipe makes all the difference. 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Great details in this flash, Jo, from the recipe for velocity to the hammared sawblade to sound the start.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Charli. Glad you enjoyed the story. 💕
LikeLike
Pingback: Long Boards « Carrot Ranch Literary Community