Snow Day

Photo assist by Jo

Photo assist by Jo

Jill had been waiting in anticipation for this day. She hoped for it every year, but so often it never seemed to materialize. Things like work and grown-up responsibilities would get in the way. But this year it looked like it might happen. She had checked and rechecked the forecast. She worked longer than she had intended to make sure all those grown-up things that needed doing were done and prayed like she had when she was a schoolgirl, “Please let it snow tomorrow.”

This year looked like it would be extra special. This was to be the first snow of the season. Watching the weatherman predict four to six inches made her giddy with anticipation. She never quite figured out why adults were exempt from snow days. Of course, there were still days when the schools were closed, but why were adults expected to fight their way through sloshy, unplowed streets and risk icy roads for the sake of work? She checked the night sky once more before heading off to bed.

Photo credit: trikelef via Visual Hunt / CC BY-NC

Photo credit: trikelef via Visual Hunt / CC BY-NC

Something woke her. The clock by the bed read three a.m. She slid from under the covers to peer out the window. In the glow of the streetlight she could see a gentle fall of snow. She watched as it floated to the ground and disappeared on the sidewalk, leaving a tiny spot of moisture where it landed. Smiling, she shivered in the cold. She watched for a few more minutes before the cold sent her diving back into the warm bed to dream of snow.

It was much later when she woke again and raced to the window to see if it was still snowing. While the streets and the sidewalks were mostly wet, the grass was covered in fluffy white snow. Great chunks that looked that cotton balls were now tumbling from the lead gray sky. She checked her phone. “Snow for at least one hundred twenty minutes” she read.

The rest of the day turned out exactly as she had hoped. Breakfast was a big meal with plenty of hot coffee to sip, instead of the normal grab and run so you won’t be late kind. Later, reading in a chair by the window she surrendered to the urge to draw a happy face on the frosted pane. That afternoon she baked cookies and made up a mug of hot chocolate. Still the snow fell. Every time she checked her phone the message read, “Snow for at least one hundred twenty minutes”.

Photo credit: I am a Pear via VisualHunt / CC BY-NC-SA

Photo credit: I am a Pear via VisualHunt / CC BY-NC-SA

The day turned into night before the snow stopped. Seven and a half inches was being reported as she bundled into her winter coat, scarf and gloves to shovel the driveway. Outside the world was quiet, truly a silent night. Her shovel dug into the white confection covering the sidewalk she knew lay below. The scrape of the shovel bit into the night air, as she pushed it deeper into the snow. This was one of her favorite parts. Pushing the snow off to the edge of driveway, then digging in to fling a heaping load of snow into the grass, she smiled.

A crescent moon hung low on the horizon casting a surreal light on the heavy, wet snow that clung desperately to the bare tree branches. Unable to maintain its grip on the tree across the street, the snow fell like sifted flour to the street below. With the driveway cleared, she paused for a moment to admire the beauty that surrounded her. For the moment, she was alone in world, free of grown-up responsibilities, free to savor that one moment.

Keep on writing.

Jo Hawk The Writer

NaNoWriMo Day 14

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Photo credit: biscorogus via VisualHunt.com / CC BY-NC-SA

Over the last couple of days, I became an involuntary volunteer.   I was nominated to puppy sit. Now if I had been asked, as is normally the custom with this type of thing, my response would have been “no thank you”.

Don’t get me wrong, I love animals. The unfortunate problem with some pets are the owners. This puppy just turned a year old and unless you are holding a treat in front of him, he does not know the meaning of the word “sit”. “Come”, and “stay” are equally foreign to the pooch.

I know it is a lot of work to train a puppy. After adopting a Shetland Sheepdog at the age of six months who was barley house broken, I have learned a thing or two. Still, by the time the Sheltie was a year-old I could walk her off lead with no issues. Well, except for the time we flushed a nest of baby bunnies. She was so disappointed that she was not able to herd them all back together.

She knew “sit”. “Stay” was a real challenge for her, but she was good for about twenty-five feet. Of course, she was never happier than when I called “come”. Walking her was a joy, as I knew that she would always be to heel.

Walking this puppy is an arm wrenching tug of war, who by the way, must weigh in around sixty pounds. By the time he left he was doing better, but without daily, consistent, reinforcement, it will soon be forgotten.

It is the same with writing.   Do it daily. Be consistent. Let the process reinforce itself. “Sit”. “Stay”. “Write”. As I do this every day, it is starting to transform from a tug of war, to joy. Prepare yourself though. There will be the day when you flush a nest of baby bunnies, or find yourself volunteered for something you were not expecting.

I hope you are finding it to be the same for you.

Word count for November 14, is:

2,500 words. Fourteen-day total 31,000.

Keep on writing.

Jo Hawk The Writer

NaNoWriMo Day 8

Below is short blub I threw together about the novel I am writing.

After surviving the Civil War, Gilbert’s only desire is to forget the horrors of the past and create a prosperous and happy family like the one he knew as a child. But after the heartbreaking deaths of four of his eight children and his beloved wife Rachael, will Gilbert be able to hold his four surviving sons together? Can he somehow manage to build a life that he dreams for his family? Or will his past tear them apart?

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Photo credit: Veronique Debord via Visual hunt / CC BY-SA

  • What do you think?
  • Is this a book you would like to read?
  • What would you change?
  • What do you like?
  • Should I go back to the drawing board?

Keep on writing.

Jo Hawk The Writer

NaNoWriMo Day 6

Something terrifying has happened. The loft where I write is full of characters. And not just the ones from the novel I am currently writing. Although they are front and center and are making a host of demands. Their biggest demand is that this is not going to be just one book but three! One of them is wanting a bigger role and another is complaining that I ‘m ignoring him and his angst. On and on it goes.

I suppose that is to be expected when you begin to write. It would be fine except… Except for all the other characters who are trying to get my attention. There is the girl with special powers (who by the way hasn’t even bothered to tell me her name). She has made it a point that I know the beginning of her story, at least four or five chapters worth, and is now telling me about a new power she thinks she has discovered.

There is the farm boy from the early 1900’s, and the little girl who insists that I tell the story of her first day of school. There is a huge ogre with a club standing over in the corner. He actually scared me at first, but so far he has been content to hang out, grunting and puffing and every so often heaving great sighs that emit a noxious grey-green vapor.

“Who keeps tugging at my sleeve while I am trying to write?”

“It is me, Mademoiselle. Vous allez écrire mon histoire,” says a young girl in a blue pinafore.

“I’m sorry, but I don’t speak French,” I say looking at her sad little face.

“And yet, you will,” is her reply.

Yikes!

The din is too much. I stand up, climbing first to the seat of the chair and then onto my desk. Stepping carefully, I try not to topple the piles of research papers.

“What are you doing?” someone asks.

“I am vertically challenged and I need your attention.”

As I wait for the room to get quiet, I notice there are more characters outside. They all have a look of expectation. What am I going to do with all of them? I guess it is a great problem to have, but it is overwhelming.

“Everyone, I need your help. I just cannot work like this.”

Murmurs of dissent begin to rise in the room and I know I have to do something fast.

“I promise each of you will get your turn. But, you have to let me work.”

More grumbling fills the room and I catch some of their words.

“Yeah, right.”

“Ain’t never gonna happen.”

“But mine is just a short story.”

The ogre in the corner is starting to look a little meaner than usual.

“Okay, okay. Here is what I’m going to do. You each will give me a brief description of your story. I will write it down and then you will promise to let me work. The sooner I can finish this story means the sooner I can come looking for one of you. If I can’t write, who are you going to get to tell your story?” Reaching down, I fish out a tablet of paper. The pile that it was in, sways and threatens to slide to the floor. I hold the tablet over my head. “Agreed?” I ask. As I climb down off the desk I hear the characters begin to consent to my terms.

One by one I quickly scribble what they want me to write. Slowly, the room begins to empty until only the little French girl remains.

“What is your story?”

“Je ne sais pas,” she says and starts to cry.

I have no idea what she just said, but she is obviously upset. Who would have the heart to ask her to leave? I know I can’t do it.

“Okay, you can stay here. But, you have to be quite and let me work. Okay?” I ask, hoping that she can understand me better than I understand her.

“Oui.”

Wiping her eyes, she heads to the wingback chair next to the bookcase. I watch her sit, and pull the throw that was draped across the back of the chair over her. Soon she is asleep.

Now, finally, I can get back to work.

Word count for November 6, is:

1,800 words. Six day total 9,600.

Keep on writing.

Jo Hawk The Writer