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Carefully chosen to accentuate my best features, my mask and I ventured into the ballroom. Partners reeled, slipping in and out of view. Some lingered for a moment, a soft caress before the music spun us away. Each one chasing a mask more tempting than the one before.
One mask began to circle back again and again. More alluring that I had dared to dream, full of promise and with eyes only for me. Your mask was a study in perfection. Thrilled, I began to fear the hour of the unmasking. Would you be repulsed by the hidden me? The me who was riddled with doubt and insecurity. The me who never quite measured up to expectations.
We danced in anticipation. You, an expert of every move, calculated and sure. I gallantly attempting to hid my uncertainty, my tentative nature. As the time drew near I became nervous, unsure, perhaps my mask had promised too much. How did I presume to be worthy of one such as you?
The clock chimed, the truth had arrived. Everything revealed. We stood naked, face to face and horror thundered through me. I had failed to consider that your mask would hide a monster.
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Keep on writing.
Jo Hawk The Writer
and the she thought she had things to hide – you always shock me at the end, the way your thoughts go but it was a fitting end.
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Exactly what I was trying to capture. Sometimes we get so caught up in our own shortcomings, we can’t see the other person. Glad you like it.
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This reminded me of “The Naked Face” by Sydney Sheldon. Your rich use of words made it majestically beautiful! 👌
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