Title: A Skeptical View
Source: Flash Fiction Challenge
Prompt: Write a story using storm windows.
Word count: 99 words
Photo by Chris Bair on Unsplash
I know it exists to protect me, that invisible, visible layer. Glass over glass, engineered to exacting standards, safeguards designed to stand between me and… I pause. From what does it save me? Certain death? Or the thrill of living on the edge?
Engineers have created car airbags, helmets for a bicycle ride, handrails, guardrails, safety instructions, protective eyewear, ear protection, and countless other safety buffers. I experience my life as a boy in a bubble. Germ-free. Sterile.
I long to defy their rules, stretch past the double pane, storm window, touch the beautiful chaos and dare to live.
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Keep on writing.
Jo Hawk The Writer
A risky move.
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Or perhaps a calculated one? 🙂
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That could be! 👍
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I love it.
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🙂
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Love where you took this and the longing and rebelliousness in the beauty of your last sentence.
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I am delighted you enjoyed it, Charli.
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