The Gift – Warm Up Exercise

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Photo credit: Heredero 3.0 via Visualhunt / CC BY-NC-ND

I looked at the fuzzy box she had laid in my hands. It was the color of dried blood, old and grimy. I imagined that it must carry some disease.

“Open it,” She croaked.

Cringing, I pried the two halves apart. Nestled in more blood-red fabric lay something I had never seen. It was smooth and shiny black. Gold bands of various sizes, some decorated, some plain, circled the blackness.

“What is it?”

She snatched it from the box. With both hands, she gave it several twists before pulling the two ends apart. One end was a hollowed-out tube. It concealed an elaborately carved gold point which was attached to the end of other half of the black stick.

I pulled back, frightened by the deadly looking thing. I watched as she caressed it, fitting the hollowed-out tube on top of the end opposite from the gold point. She began to roll it in one gnarled hand as if she had done this all her life.

“What does it do?”

She sat silently. I had seen her like this before. There was no point in saying anything else until the memory that held her mind, released her.

“Do you remember? Syngraféas.”

I couldn’t tell if she was talking to me or her memory.

“You made me read all his stuff,” I answered anyway.

“This belonged to him. And to a long line of Mór Guardians before him. You have read them too, the others who owned this. All of them, the best of their age.” As she spoke she raised her hand to her eyes, staring at it.

“You are talented. The best I have seen in over a hundred years. He told me I would know. You asked me for my secret. How I create the stories millions read. Syngraféas was my mentor. He gave this to me when I was very young. Not long before he died.”

She paused, lowered her hand to her lap and turned her gaze to me. For some reason, I was very afraid.

“It was forbidden you know. Long ago, when people were only allowed to read what was sanctioned. And so, they forgot. Only the bravest kept the craft alive. Slowly, we became revered, the Guardians. You remember the tale of the Fountain?”

I swallowed hard. I knew it well.

“Yes, the Fountain is the source of all great stories.”

“And…” she prompted.

“And only one who is deemed worthy is permitted access to the Fountain,” I repeated the line all novices were required to learned.

“Are you worthy?” she asked as her eyes looked into my very soul.

“Me?” I whispered.

Her laughter crackled like dry leaves in the wind. With both hands, she raised the black and gold object high above her head.

“Behold the Pen of the Fountain.”

Once again, her eyes found mine.

“Prepare yourself. Tomorrow it will determine if you are worthy.”

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Keep on writing.

Jo Hawk The Writer

Rock Requiem

photo by Edwin Undrade via Unsplash

photo by Edwin Undrade via Unsplash

Where have all the great Rock stars gone?

Thousands came to hear and feel, to be transported and transformed.

Echoes, reverberations on empty stadium walls leaving only memories of the swaying crowd.

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From Sonya’s 3LineTales at Only100Words. You can find the original prompt here. Thanks Sonya.

Keep on writing.

Jo Hawk The Writer

The Lesson – Warm Up Exercise

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Photo credit: apintogsphotos via Visual hunt / CC BY-NC-ND

“Go practice,” Mother repeated.

“I’ll do it later.”

“No. Now.”

“But…”

Mother’s face was stern as she pointed to the bedroom where the trombone waited.

The door slammed followed by an angry blast from the instrument. Mother sighed as strains of practice music filtered through the closed door. She picked up her book, searching for where she had left off. As she began reading, a sour note jolted her from the passage.

The playing stopped. When it resumed, she returned to her book until the same note stopped her again. Time after time, the same sour note grated at her. Throwing the book on the chair, she headed to the bedroom and flung open the door.

“What in the world…” her voice trailed off as she glanced around the room.

The trombone lay on the bed while music filled the air. Her darling child, was playing a video game.

“Where is that music coming from?”

A finger pointed to a cell phone.

She snatched it from the desk.

“You really need to practice. You can’t get this note right,” she pointed at the phone just as the offensive note was repeated. She left the room and trombone practice finally began.

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Keep on writing.

Jo Hawk The Writer

Follow the Light – FFfAW

photo prompt provided by Sunayana with MoiPensieve

photo prompt provided by Sunayana with MoiPensieve

Title: Follow the Light
Source: Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers – Week of February 14, 2017
Word count: 170 words

The day spiraled in a cycle of meetings, client revisions and more meetings Her watch marked time slipping away. The deal was struck and the obligatory dinner celebration began. Thanks, but she had to go.

They rescheduled her flight. It was the last one leaving JFK. She wouldn’t get to Paris until midafternoon. Her watch ticked. Finally, she escaped and hailed a cab.

Hurry, she nearly screamed.

“Lady! You blind? Construction” he gestured at the orange signs.

She arrived at the gate just in time to board, only to discover the flight was being delayed. Weather, they said.

It was dark as she pushed past the crazy scooters. Their shrill horns marking her audacity. Almost there. She found the door and leaned hard to open it. It slammed shut as she dropped her bag and raced up the three flights

The nurse met her at the door. Her grim face said everything.

“Papa?”

“I’ve been waiting.”

“Papa, did you see the lights?”

He nodded feebly.

“Yes Angel. My beautiful Angel.”

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Keep on writing.

Jo Hawk The Writer

Happy Valentine’s Day

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Photo credit: Kaptain Kobold via VisualHunt.com / CC BY-NC-SA

Having captured my Valentine’s heart, the pressure is off. Whew. What a relief to no longer worry about how to survive the fourteenth of February.

I once marked the day in RED, and not for the reasons you might imagine. No, the red was a necessary reminder. Warning, warning. Break out the Kevlar. Strap on the defense mechanisms. Engage stealth mode. Keep your head down. And whatever you do, agree to nothing.

Your co-worker suggests a group dinner out. “Low key,” she says. At the last moment, she tells you, “Oh, by the way, we have a friend who is free and will be joining us for dinner”. That is code for a group of couples who have discovered you are not “coupled up” and have desperately searched out a prospect for you. Ask me how I know.

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Photo credit: Spirit635 via VisualHunt / CC BY-NC-SA

Busy body. I would have been fine. At home. Alone with a full-bodied Italian. I had splurged and bought the Chianti that had a cork, not the screw top.

Valentine’s day is easy now. No more snarky questions. No more lame excuses. No more looks of pity. No more unwanted pressure. I still see no need for giant teddy bears, and the other frou-frou that goes with the day. Years without those trappings have cured me. A quite dinner will suffice. And perhaps a Chianti with a cork.

I hope you are able to enjoy the day exactly as you wish.

Keep on writing.

Jo Hawk The Writer

Close Enough – Warm Up Exercise

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Photo credit: MTSOfan via Visualhunt.com / CC BY-NC-SA

She dipped her hands into water before cupping them around a blob of clay she had thrown on to the wheel. The clay was cold. The wheel began to spin. She kneaded it, using the rhythmic motion that started every dance. Drawing it up and pushing it down, centering it on the wheel. The clay warmed to her touch. It yielded to the guidance of her fingers as  she began drawing it up into the shape her hands knew so well. The shape her hands had touched every morning. It had shattered with news of the accident.

She pushed the feelings of frustrations, anger and loss from her mind. She didn’t want to infuse the clay with those emotions. Instead she closed her eyes and focused on the memory of that long-ago day, a day she recalled as if it were yesterday. She could smell the scent of him, feel the heat of his body as he placed his hands on hers. She felt the clay being molded by her hands, changing with the pressure she applied.

She stopped the wheel and opened her eyes, smiling at the form which stood before her. It wasn’t exactly the same, it could never be that. But it would bring her at least some comfort. She carefully removed it from the wheel and attached the handle. She knew the next steps, they wouldn’t be easy to endure. Time to cure, time to endure the fire of the kiln, and the multiple steps of glazing to forge the impenetrable outer layer that would protect the contents.

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The day had finally arrived to open the kiln. Inside her best friend waited for her, the one who knew all her secrets, her sorrows and her happiness.

“Yes Friend, the coffee is ready. Should we try it out?”

The steaming brew cascaded into the cobalt blue interior. She stared at the black pupil encased in blue. His eyes. No, it wasn’t exactly the same. But it would have to be close enough. Close enough to allow her to return to the daily rhythm of life, close enough to pretend that she was moving on.

Keep on writing.

Jo Hawk The Writer

A Few Miles – FFfAW

Title: A Few Miles
Source: Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers – Week of February 7, 2017
Word count: 170 words

Credit: Mike Vore

Credit: Mike Vore

He watched as Billy and his men pried his first love from her resting place. While the crew loaded her on the flatbed, Billy came over to shake his hand again.

“Got a lot of miles left in ‘er. I’ll git ‘er back on the road.”

“You do that.”
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He heard a car on the gravel drive and went to investigate.

Billy jumped out of the red truck.

“Whacha think?”

“Can’t be.”

“Tis.”

“Didn’t look this good when I bought her.”

Billy tossed the keys at him. He caught them with clumsy gnarled hands.

“Take “er.”

“You ain’t gittin’ your five large back.”

“Drive ‘er. When your tired of ‘er, call me.”

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Billy answered, even though he didn’t know the number.

“My Pa left me a note. Says to call you bout the truck.”

“I’m sorry.”

“What? He ain’t dead. Done run off with that red head over in Jasper. Says to tell you the truck ain’t the only one whats got a few miles left.”

Billy laughed.

 

Keep on writing.
Jo Hawk The Writer

Orb – Today’s Warm Up Exercise

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Photo credit: freestock.ca ♡ dare to share beauty via Visual hunt / CC BY

Here is today’s Warm Up Exercise. Hope you enjoy it.

A whip struck hard across her face. Dagma didn’t stop. She could feel the thin line of her flesh begin to burn and knew the unseen branch had drawn blood. A howl rose from the rabid dogs behind her as the scent carried through the woods. They wanted a taste of blood. Her blood.

Her lungs burned, her legs trembled from fatigue and she could feel a muscle spasm in her side. Her mind told her she could not falter now. Dagma ran. She envisioned herself as strong and fresh as she had been days ago, when she had first begun her escape. The woods were misty gray. Great black sentinel trees rose in front of her to cut her off from her destination. The ground beneath her was covered in slick leaves and slimy mud.

The thinning of the trees didn’t seem real at first. The mist began to part, clearing the way for her. The baying of the tireless dogs grew louder, closer now. Dagma ran. The woods gave way to the setting sun steaking amber hews across a silver meadow. In the center, she saw the white orb and raced to where it stood, sinking to the ground next to it. She had to be careful, disturbing the delicate orb in any way would ruin everything. She cupped one hand around the orb and gently plucked it from where it grew.

She stilled her ragged breath and tilted the fluffy orb into the sunlight. “Come on. Please,” she silently begged. A golden flash shot across the face of the orb tracing a path along the fine filaments that the connected to each seed. No, not that one. Dagma waited. The golden path changed, again and again, and still she waited. She could hear the unrelenting dogs, they would be on her shortly.

The meadow trembled from the pounding of the giant dogs racing towards her. They crashed through the edge of the woods snarling in delight at the sight of their prey in front of them. She didn’t look up, seeing only the golden path as it chased across the orb. There, that was the one. She raised the orb to her lips, closed her eyes and blew gently. Dagma was gone. The monstrous dogs came barking and yelping into the center of the meadow, vainly searching for what was no longer there. Above them, dandelion seeds floated in the last light of the setting sun.

Keep on writing.

Jo Hawk The Writer

Mystery Blogger Award! Yea Haw!

mystery-blogger-awardI’ve been nominated for the Mystery Blogger Award by thewordsmith27!

This is so cool. I am beyond words. It has always been a dream of mine. But I never imagined that it would actually happen. Humbled. Yes, that is the word. Humbled and deeply honored.

So, when do I get that little statue of the gold man? Oh sorry, wrong award.

Seriously, I wish to thank thewordsmith27 for the nomination!

“The Mystery Blogger Award was created by Okoto Enigma. It is an award for amazing bloggers with ingenious posts. Their blog not only captivates; it inspires and motivates. They are one of the best out there, and they deserve every recognition they get. This award is also for bloggers who find fun and inspiration in blogging; and they do it with so much love and passion.” The Rules:

  • Display the award logo on your blog.
  • List the rules.
  • Thank the blogger who nominated you and also provide a link to their blog.
  • Mention the creator of the award and provide a link as well.
  •  Tell your readers three things about yourself.
  • Answer five questions from the nominator.
  • Nominate anywhere near ten to twenty bloggers. Notify them by leaving a comment on their blogs.
  •  Ask your nominees any five questions of your choice, including one weird or funny question.
  • Share the link to your best post.

Here are Three Things About Me:

  1. I have always loved books and learned how to read well before kindergarten. I remember going to the library in our small town to check out books. There was a limit on the number of books, I think the most you could check out at any one time was five. Of course, I was always over the limit, but sometimes the librarian would let me slide, or I managed to slip a couple of my books onto baby brother’s stack of one. I went twice a week.
  2. In school, they published summer reading lists. I would grab one for several grades above me, check off the ones that I had already read and add the others to help round out “my” summer reading list. I was in every honor class my school offered and was granted early admissions to college so I could take college course while I was still technically in high school.
  3. Writing for me, was a natural progression from all that reading. Countless, instructors told me writing was the field I should pursue. But, I needed a job that would pay the bills. So, I majored in accounting, got my CPA and put writing on hold. Until now.

My five questions from thewordsmith27

dune frank_herbert first_edition

dune frank_herbert first_edition

1. What’s your favourite quote and why?

“I must not fear. Fear is the mind-killer. Fear is the little-death that brings total obliteration. I will face my fear. I will permit it to pass over me and through me. And when it has gone past I will turn the inner eye to see its path. Where the fear has gone there will be nothing. Only I will remain.”    – Dune

The first time I read Dune these words entered every fiber of my being. I cannot begin to count the number of times that I have stood in my “Face my fear” Dune stance and let the fear pass so I could get on with whatever difficult task lay ahead of me.

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Photo credit: hyku via VisualHunt.com / CC BY

2. If you could bring one famous person back to life, who would it be, and why?
I tend to agree with the Genie from Aladdin when he says:

“I can’t bring people back from the dead. It’s not a pretty picture…”

But if I had to bring one person back I would choose my grandmother so that l could bombard her with questions that pertain to the book I am writing. I know, not “famous” but the things she saw could really help me out right now.

3. What is your favourite book/poem?

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Photo credit: kennymatic via Visualhunt.com / CC BY

I truly hope I have not yet read my favorite book or poem. I do have a slew of “go to” authors.

For poems:

Emily Dickinson, E. E. Cummings, Robert Frost,
Derek Walcott – Omeros,
Yeats, Poe, Angelou,
Blake, Shakespeare, Langston Hughes
Best to end with just these few.

For Books:
TH White, Isaac Asimov, Robert Jordan, John Muir, Shakespeare, James A Michener, Julia Child, Beowulf, Chaucer (in old English), Lao Tzu, Margaret Mitchell, Tracy Chevalier, Doris Kearns Goodwin, Carl Sandburg, Dante. These are a sampling of those that crowd my numerous bookshelves.

4. What gives you the inspiration to write?
It seems that inspiration is not the motivation for writing, rather it is the weight of the untold stories that populate my head, demanding to see the light of day. At this point it is almost self-preservation. I counted. There are ten books in various stages of development and numerous short stories vying for their turn at the keyboard.

5. What is happiness to you? Happiness is finally being able to do the thing I love.

My nominees are:

Its PHmystery-blogger-award
Bikurgurl
Millie Thom
4amwriter.com
Miss Sissinghurst
The Nostalgia Diaries
Something Over Tea
Pat Bean’s blog
Single Dads are Cool!
Brilliant Viewpoint

Anyone else who’s reading this and would like to participate, please consider yourselves nominated.

My questions to the above nominees:

    1. Who would play you in the movie of your life?
    2. What is your inspiration for writing?
    3. Where would you live, if money didn’t matter?
    4. When did (or will) you consider yourself successful?
    5. Why did you start blogging?

The post I like best is Fathom.

A Little Experiment

Call me Guinea Pig.

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Photo credit: wcn247 via Visualhunt.com / CC BY-NC

Over the last few months I have been on a quest to discover the right process, the right combination of factors to produce a known and quantifiable result. To be precise I have been searching for the method I need to employ to get my first draft completed.

I have been doing the normal things you do when you start out, tracking number of words written, duration of writing and any comments on the writing period. The results at first were great. But you must account for the initial euphoria that ensues with anything new and exciting.

At the same time, I was studying other processes people employ in various disciplines. From those observations one thing emerged which ran across all types of disciplines. Except writing. That one thing was a warm up. Professionals tended to utilized some type of warm up prior to beginning the real work. Athletes, musicians, singers, painters, photographers, they all did a warm up before they started the real task in front of them. The warm up looked different for each of them, but it was there.

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I also happened across a program that delved into how habits are formed. One telling comment stated that the most productive people have developed cues which trigger a habit allowing them to go thru the day without having to make real decisions.

How can I apply these seemingly different ideas to my writing? How do writers warm up? How can I set up a writing cue? Will doing any of this matter? Since I had been tracking my daily word count I could do something interesting. I overlaid the days I had posted to the blog with the daily word count and an interesting pattern began to emerge.

On days with an initial blog post prior to writing, the word count was generally higher than on days without a blog post. On days where the word count was not appreciably higher, the trend was that it took less time to write the same quantity of words.

Photo via Visualhunt

Photo via Visualhunt

As with any light bulb moment, it raised more questions. Is a small writing piece really a “warm up” for writers? Can it be used as a cue to trigger the mental coding of a habit? Does the duration of the “warm up” significantly impact the number of words or the length of time to write those words? Does publishing to the blog have an impact? Is it a matter of how many words are written in the “warm up” or is it simply the “warm up” itself that triggers the habit? How do I tailor this for me?

These are my initial thoughts i.e. the experiment. I like writing to a photo prompt, so I will use a photo as my jumping off point. I will not specify any format or word count. Applying the K.I.S.S. (Keep It Simple Stupid) algorithm it will be photo prompt, write, track, write on draft, track.

Let the experiment begin.

Keep on writing.

Jo Hawk The Writer