Battle Above the Clouds — FFfAW Challenge

Title:  Battle Above the Clouds
Source: Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers
Word count: 160 words

Mist at dawn house rail fence

This week’s photo prompt is provided by Jodi McKinney. Thank you, Jodi!

We woke in darkness. General Geary ordered us to prepare to cross Lookout Creek at dawn. The November morning dawned chilly and damp in the valley. Our brigade massed as the fog swirled around us. The creek water ran high, and we waited. An hour and a half past dawn the water ebbed, and we received orders to move. Crossing the footbridge, we knew the objective was to meet near the Cravens house.

The mist and fog rose as we advanced up the mountain. We engaged in skirmishes with an enemy we could not see. The terrain proved rougher than any we had encountered. Rocks large and small had fallen from the mountain’s wall littered deep ravines. The forest claimed any space not occupied by rocks. Our force outnumbered the rebels, yet each step was a battle, and we fought to claim the inaccessible heights of Lookout Mountain.  The mountain was ours and the battle above the clouds became folklore.


Keep on writing.

Jo Hawk The Writer

11 thoughts on “Battle Above the Clouds — FFfAW Challenge

  1. I did wonder whether it was the American civil war or the American war of independences, so I was pleased to read your follow up comment to me. Within the constraints of flash writing I think you said everything that was needed. It was a great piece of historical storytelling, that I really enjoyed reading.

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