Title: The Time Machine
Source: Friday Fictioneers sponsored by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields-Addicted to Purple
Word count: 100 words

PHOTO PROMPT © J Hardy Carroll
Time travel’s first rule was validating your arrival date. I stepped through the portal and groaned.
A 1950s era diner? Was Josh joking?
Diners were ubiquitous on the timelines. I could cite countless examples over the last 200 years. This establishment offered no clues I was in the correct year before the portal slammed shut.
This place was quiet, too quiet. A shiver raced down my spine, and my stomach heaved.
We told the initiates fantastical tales, our attempt to scare first-time travelers. I had never seen one and doubted they existed. Until today.
I turned and faced The Watcher.
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Keep on writing.
Jo Hawk The Writer
Nicely done, Jo. Great tension. I’m guessing the watchers are charged with stopping travellers messing up the timelines
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The Watcher is race of extraterrestrials from Marvel Comics and may or may not be related to the Morlocks from “The Time Machine” by H.G Wells. Glad you liked the story, Neil.
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I like how you built this from confusion, through concern, to fear.
Great piece, Jo
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Thanks, CE. I am glad you liked it. 🙏
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Very well done Jo.
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Thank you, Sadje. 🙏
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You’re welcome 😉
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What happens next?
(Taken as a compliment, I hope.)
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Not sure, guess I need another 100 words. 🙂👍
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I enjoyed this and agree that…Them that are watchers, are to be feared.
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Being watched is unnerving. Glad you liked it Michael.
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Wonderful write, Jo… the tension built and then… what happens next?
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That is what happens when you run out of words. 🙂 We will see where this goes. 👍
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Just say it was planned to leave us hanging!
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Oh, right. That was the plan. 😎
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😉
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